Thursday, October 31, 2013

10.31.31- HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!

HAPPY HALLOWEEN 🎃<--- jack o lantern :)
Hope you have a happy Halloween!!! 

*today I searched for pictures for my story so I can make it a digital story.*

Here's my youtube channel where I will post the finished digital story:

http://www.youtube.com/channel/UCm38JeGey_oR36sPkDIpkDQ


Here's the latest version of my story:

http://helendevine.blogspot.com/2013/10/102913-from-sad-to-sunny.html

Wednesday, October 30, 2013

10.30.13- *None*

*I didn't write today because we were in the Media Center and we had a mini lesson.*

Tuesday, October 29, 2013

10.29.13- From sad to Sunny

From Sad to Sunny *i revised today*

"Seriously? It's raining?" My cousin Kiri complained.

She was right. It was pouring. The raindrops leaked down the window and the entire car was freezing. If you looked down at the road, you could see that there were puddles scattered along the ground and the car splashed through them easily.
Kiri's dad tried to calm her down, but she wasn't having it. I agreed with her though, it was a pretty terrible day for rain.
Today was the first day of camp at LOMC. Emma started at LOMC, then Kiri joined her, and about three summers later I started going. It was my third year. I remember coming to LOMC before, and I definitely remembered my first year. On my very first day, I remember that it was a hot, sunny day, almost the exact opposite of the weather today. I was also much more nervous. When I got out of the car, the entire camp was so much bigger than I thought. With a huge field, forest, and pond, I knew that I was in for a interesting surprise.
Of course, it had to rain on the day we got dropped off and had to deal with all our stuff. Plus, there was dirt and dust everywhere, and now it was mud. Great. Just great.
Suddenly, we took a sharp turn onto a side dirt road with a wooden sign that read LOMC in big gold letters. The sign was soaked. The ground was soaked. Everything was soaked. The second you stepped out into this weather you were sure to be soaked and freezing in 5 seconds flat. 
"We're here!" Kiri's dad said cheerfully while we pulled up the short dirt road. Emma, Kiri and I were definitely excited to be there, but the weather wasn't exactly ideal. 
The car pulled into a parking space and shut off. Now all we could hear was the bitter rain pelting the windows.
"Is anybody else cold?" I asked. Kiri and Emma both agreed, but Kiri's dad seemed optimistic. Great.
"Okay, lets check you in first and we'll come back to get your things," he said, already stepping out of the car in a attempt to get us to follow. We all groaned. Although at the same time we agreed silently that we might as well just go.
The second I stepped out of the car I was immediately pulled by the freezing wind. I was not only being practically blown away by it, but the rain was worse than it seemed from the safety of the car. The second you felt a raindrop, it almost numbed you. And the rain wasn't just falling, it was being whipped into your face by the wind like a tornado.
Emma jumped out of the car and she reacted just as I expected.
"I'm FREEZING!" She shivered. "Lets go to the pole barn! At least there won't be as much rain!"
The pole barn was a huge barn with open walls and a roof supported by wooden poles. Picnic table were placed along the inside, and that's where we had to go to check in. We all ran through the rain to the pole barn, where Kiri's dad began the long process of checking us in. 
"Helen! Emma!" Kiri called from the side of the barn. "Look over here!" 
"Where?" I said, shivering. 
Kiri laughed. "C'mon!" 
I walked over to where my cousin was standing. She was in the middle of a circle of brightly colored picnic tables.
"Look at this." Kiri said, smiling. When I looked around, I saw that each of them were uniquely painted with patterns and names. It was a myriad of bright colors and last-minute additions, with splatter paint and mixed-up names placed in every nook and cranny of the tables. 
"Do you recognize any of them?" I asked. I saw that some were from the year before, but a lot of them were from this year.
"Some of them," Kiri replied. "But there's a lot of new ones, too."
Emma walked over. "Hey you guys, look at the sky!"
Kiri and I turned to look out. "What about it?"
Emma laughed. "It stopped raining! And look at that rainbow!"
She was right. It had stopped raining, and now the entire world sparkled with the raindrops. There was a vivid rainbow that looked like a mix of paint across the sky. 
"It's so pretty!" Kiri's voice sounded like it was smiling.
I looked back at the sky. The rainbow was still there, and it remained there for the rest of the day. Even the sun was a shining penny in the sky. We had started the day with a gloomy, wet rain, and we had ended it with a beautiful sunset.

Monday, October 28, 2013

10.28.13- From Sad to Sunny

From Sad to Sunny

"Seriously? It's raining?" My cousin Kiri complained.
She was right. It was pouring. The raindrops leaked down the window and the entire car was freezing. If you looked down at the road, you could see that there were puddles scattered along the ground and the car splashed through them easily.
Kiri's dad tried to calm her down, but she wasn't having it. I agreed with her though, it was a pretty terrible day for rain.
Today was the first day of camp at LOMC. Emma started at LOMC, then Kiri joined her, and about three summers later I started going. It was my third year. I remember coming to LOMC before, and I definitely remembered my first year. On my very first day, I remember that it was a hot, sunny day, almost the exact opposite of the weather today. I was also much more nervous. When I got out of the car, the entire camp was so much bigger than I thought. With a huge field, forest, and pond, I knew that I was in for a interesting surprise.
Of course, it had to rain on the day we got dropped off and had to deal with all our stuff. Plus, there was dirt and dust everywhere, and now it was mud. Great. Just great.
Suddenly, we took a sharp turn onto a side dirt road with a wooden sign that read LOMC in big gold letters. The sign was soaked. The ground was soaked. Everything was soaked. The second you stepped out into this weather you were sure to be soaked and freezing in 5 seconds flat. 
"We're here!" Kiri's dad said cheerfully while we pulled up the short dirt road. Emma, Kiri and I were definitely excited to be there, but the weather wasn't exactly ideal. 
The car pulled into a parking space and shut off. Now all we could hear was the bitter rain pelting the windows.
"Is anybody else cold?" I asked. Kiri and Emma both agreed, but Kiri's dad seemed optimistic. Great.
"Okay, lets check you in first and we'll come back to get your things," he said, already stepping out of the car in a attempt to get us to follow. We all groaned. Although at the same time we agreed silently that we might as well just go.
The second I stepped out of the car I was immediately pulled by the freezing wind. I was not only being practically blown away by it, but the rain was worse than it seemed from the safety of the car. The second you felt a raindrop, it almost numbed you. And the rain wasn't just falling, it was being whipped into your face by the wind like a tornado.
Emma jumped out of the car and she reacted just as I expected.
"I'm FREEZING!" She shivered. "Lets go to the pole barn! At least there won't be as much rain!"
The pole barn was a huge barn with open walls and a roof supported by wooden poles. Picnic table were placed along the inside, and that's where we had to go to check in. We all ran through the rain to the pole barn, where Kiri's dad began the long process of checking us in. 
"Helen! Emma!" Kiri called from the side of the barn. "Look over here!" 
"Where?" I said, shivering. 
Kiri laughed. "C'mon!" 
I walked over to where my cousin was standing. She was in the middle of a circle of brightly colored picnic tables.
"Look at this." Kiri said, smiling. When I looked around, I saw that each of them were uniquely painted with patterns and names. It was a myriad of bright colors and last-minute additions, with splatter paint and mixed-up names placed in every nook and cranny of the tables. 
"Do you recognize any of them?" I asked. I saw that some were from the year before, but a lot of them were from this year.
"Some of them," Kiri replied. "But there's a lot of new ones, too."
Emma walked over. "Hey you guys, look at the sky!"
Kiri and I turned to look out. "What about it?"
Emma laughed. "It stopped raining! And look at that rainbow!"
She was right. It had stopped raining, and now the entire world sparkled with the raindrops. There was a vivid rainbow that looked like a mix of paint across the sky. 
"It's so pretty!" Kiri's voice sounded like it was smiling.
I looked back at the sky. The rainbow was still there, and it remained there for the rest of the day. Even the sun was a shining penny in the sky. We had started the day with a gloomy, wet rain, and we had ended it with a beautiful sunset.

Friday, October 25, 2013

10.25.13- From Sad to Sunny

From Sad to Sunny

"Seriously? It's raining?" My cousin Kiri complained.
She was right. It was pouring. The raindrops leaked down the window and the entire car was freezing. If you looked down at the road, you could see that there were puddles scattered along the ground and the car splashed through them easily.
Kiri's dad tried to calm her down, but she wasn't having it. I agreed with her though, it was a pretty terrible day for rain.
Today was the first day of camp at LOMC. Emma started at LOMC, then Kiri joined her, and about three summers later I started going. It was my third year. 
Of course, it had to rain on the day we got dropped off and had to deal with all our stuff. Plus, there was dirt and dust everywhere, and now it was mud. Great. Just great.
Suddenly, we took a sharp turn onto a side dirt road with a wooden sign that read LOMC in big gold letters. The sign was soaked. The ground was soaked. Everything was soaked. The second you stepped out into this weather you were sure to be soaked and freezing in 5 seconds flat. 
"We're here!" Kiri's dad said cheerfully while we pulled up the short dirt road. Emma, Kiri and I were definitely excited to be there, but the weather wasn't exactly ideal. 
The car pulled into a parking space and shut off. Now all we could hear was the bitter rain pelting the windows.
"Is anybody else cold?" I asked. Kiri and Emma both agreed, but Kiri's dad seemed optimistic. Great.
"Okay, lets check you in first and we'll come back to get your things," he said, already stepping out of the car in a attempt to get us to follow. We all groaned. Although at the same time we agreed silently that we might as well just go.
The second I stepped out of the car I was immediately pulled by the freezing wind. I was not only being practically blown away by it, but the rain was worse than it seemed from the safety of the car. The second you felt a raindrop, it almost numbed you. And the rain wasn't just falling, it was being whipped into your face by the wind like a tornado.
Emma jumped out of the car and she reacted just as I expected.
"I'm FREEZING!" She shivered. "Lets go to the pole barn! At least there won't be as much rain!"
The pole barn was a huge barn with open walls and a roof supported by wooden poles. Picnic table were placed along the inside, and that's where we had to go to check in. We all ran through the rain to the pole barn, where Kiri's dad began the long process of checking us in. 
"Helen! Emma!" Kiri called from the side of the barn. "Look over here!" 
"Where?" I said, shivering. 
Kiri laughed. "C'mon!" 
I walked over to where my cousin was standing. She was in the middle of a circle of brightly colored picnic tables.
"Look at this." Kiri said, smiling. When I looked around, I saw that each of them were uniquely painted with patterns and names. It was a myriad of bright colors and last-minute additions, with splatter paint and mixed-up names placed in every nook and cranny of the tables. 4g t
"Do you recognize any of them?" I asked. I saw that some were from the year before, but a lot of them were from this year.
"Some of them," Kiri replied. "But there's a lot of new ones, too."
Emma walked over. "Hey you guys, look at the sky!"
Kiri and I turned to look out. "What about it?"
Emma laughed. "It stopped raining! And look at that rainbow!"
She was right. It had stopped raining, and now the entire world sparkled with the raindrops. There was a vivid rainbow that looked like a mix of paint across the sky. 
"It's so pretty!" Kiri's voice sounded like it was smiling.
I looked back at the sky. The rainbow was still there, and it remained there for the rest of the day. Even the sun was a shining penny in the sky. We had started the day with a gloomy, wet rain, and we had ended it with a beautiful sunset.

Thursday, October 24, 2013

10.24.13- From Sad to Sunny

From Sad to Sunny

"Seriously? It's raining?" My cousin Kiri complained.
She was right. It was pouring. The raindrops leaked down the window and the entire car was freezing. If you looked down at the road, you could see that there were puddles scattered along the ground and the car splashed through them easily.
Kiri's dad tried to calm her down, but she wasn't having it. I agreed with her though, it was a pretty terrible day for rain.
Today was the first day of camp at LOMC. Emma started at LOMC, then Kiri joined her, and about three summers later I started going. It was my third year.
Of course, it had to rain on the day we got dropped off and had to deal with all our stuff. Plus, there was dirt and dust everywhere, and now it was mud. Great. Just great.
Suddenly, we took a sharp turn onto a side dirt road with a wooden sign that read LOMC in big gold letters. The sign was soaked. The ground was soaked. Everything was soaked. The second you stepped out into this weather you were sure to be soaked and freezing in 5 seconds flat. 
"We're here!" Kiri's dad said cheerfully while we pulled up the short dirt road. Emma, Kiri and I were definitely excited to be there, but the weather wasn't exactly ideal. 
The car pulled into a parking space and shut off. Now all we could hear was the bitter rain pelting the windows.
"Is anybody else cold?" I asked. Kiri and Emma both agreed, but Kiri's dad seemed optimistic. Great.
"Okay, lets check you in first and we'll come back to get your things," he said, already stepping out of the car in a attempt to get us to follow. We all groaned. Although at the same time we agreed silently that we might as well just go.
The second I stepped out of the car I was immediately pulled by the freezing wind. I was not only being practically blown away by it, but the rain was worse than it seemed from the safety of the car. The second you felt a raindrop, it almost numbed you. And the rain wasn't just falling, it was being whipped into your face by the wind like a tornado.
Emma jumped out of the car and she reacted just as I expected.
"I'm FREEZING!" She shivered. "Lets go to the pole barn! At least there won't be as much rain!"
The pole barn was a huge barn with open walls and a roof supported by wooden poles. Picnic table were placed along the inside, and that's where we had to go to check in. We all ran through the rain to the pole barn, where Kiri's dad began the long process of checking us in. 
"Helen! Emma!" Kiri called from the side of the barn. "Look over here!" 
"Where?" I said, shivering. 
Kiri laughed. "C'mon!" 
I walked over to where my cousin was standing. She was in the middle of a circle of brightly colored picnic tables.
"Look at this." Kiri said, smiling. When I looked around, I saw that each of them were uniquely painted with patterns and names. It was a myriad of bright colors and last-minute additions, with splatter paint and mixed-up names placed in every nook and cranny of the tables. 
"Do you recognize any of them?" I asked. I saw that some were from the year before, but a lot of them were from this year.
"Some of them," Kiri replied. "But there's a lot of new ones, too."
Emma walked over. "Hey you guys, look at the sky!"
Kiri and I turned to look out. "What about it?"
Emma laughed. "It stopped raining! And look at that rainbow!"
She was right. It had stopped raining, and now the entire world sparkled with the raindrops. There was a vivid rainbow that looked like a mix of paint across the sky. 
"It's so pretty!" Kiri's voice sounded like it was smiling.
I looked back at the sky. The rainbow was still there, and it remained there for the rest of the day. Even the sun was a shining penny in the sky. We had started the day with a gloomy, wet rain, and we had ended it with a beautiful sunset.

Wednesday, October 23, 2013

10.23.13


From Sad to Sunny

From Sad to Sunny

"Seriously? It's raining?" My cousin Kiri complained.
She was right. It was pouring. The raindrops leaked down the window and the entire car was freezing. If you looked down at the road, you could see that there were puddles scattered along the ground and the car splashed through them easily.
Kiri's dad tried to calm her down, but she wasn't having it. I agreed with her though, it was a pretty terrible day for rain.
Today was the first day of camp at LOMC. Emma started at LOMC, then Kiri joined her, and about three summers later I started going. It was my third year.
Of course, it had to rain on the day we got dropped off and had to deal with all our stuff. Plus, there was dirt and dust everywhere, and now it was mud. Great. Just great.
Suddenly, we took a sharp turn onto a side dirt road with a wooden sign that read LOMC in big gold letters. The sign was soaked. The ground was soaked. Everything was soaked. The second you stepped out into this weather you were sure to be soaked and freezing in 5 seconds flat. 
"We're here!" Kiri's dad said cheerfully while we pulled up the short dirt road. Emma, Kiri and I were definitely excited to be there, but the weather wasn't exactly ideal. 
The car pulled into a parking space and shut off. Now all we could hear was the bitter rain pelting the windows.
"Is anybody else cold?" I asked. Kiri and Emma both agreed, but Kiri's dad seemed optimistic. Great.
"Okay, lets check you in first and we'll come back to get your things," he said, already stepping out of the car in a attempt to get us to follow. We all groaned. Although at the same time we agreed silently that we might as well just go.
The second I stepped out of the car I was immediately pulled by the freezing wind. I was not only being practically blown away by it, but the rain was worse than it seemed from the safety of the car. The second you felt a raindrop, it almost numbed you. And the rain wasn't just falling, it was being whipped into your face by the wind like a tornado.
Emma jumped out of the car and she reacted just as I expected.
"I'm FREEZING!" She shivered. "Lets go to the pole barn! At least there won't be as much rain!"
The pole barn was a huge barn with open walls and a roof supported by wooden poles. Picnic table were placed along the inside, and that's where we had to go to check in. We all ran through the rain to the pole barn, where Kiri's dad began the long process of checking us in. 
"Helen! Emma!" Kiri called from the side of the barn. "Look over here!" 
"Where?" I said, shivering. 
Kiri laughed. "C'mon!" 
I walked over to where my cousin was standing. She was in the middle of a circle of brightly colored picnic tables.
"Look at this." Kiri said, smiling. When I looked around, I saw that each of them were uniquely painted with patterns and names. It was a myriad of bright colors and last-minute additions, with splatter paint and mixed-up names placed in every nook and cranny of the tables. 
"Do you recognize any of them?" I asked. I saw that some were from the year before, but a lot of them were from this year.
"Some of them," Kiri replied. "But there's a lot of new ones, too."
Emma walked over. "Hey you guys, look at the sky!"
Kiri and I turned to look out. "What about it?"
Emma laughed. "It stopped raining! And look at that rainbow!"
She was right. It had stopped raining, and now the entire world sparkled with the raindrops. There was a vivid rainbow that looked like a mix of paint across the sky. 
"It's so pretty!" Kiri's voice sounded like it was smiling.
I looked back at the sky. The rainbow was still there, and it remained there for the rest of the day. Even the sun was a shining penny in the sky. We had started the day with a gloomy, wet rain, and we had ended it with a beautiful sunset.

Tuesday, October 22, 2013

10.22.13- From Sad to Sunny

From Sad to Sunny

"Seriously? It's raining?" My cousin Kiri complained.
She was right. It was pouring. The raindrops leaked down the window and the entire car was freezing. If you looked down at the road, you could see that there were puddles scattered along the ground and the car splashed through them easily.
Kiri's dad tried to calm her down, but she wasn't having it. I agreed with her though, it was a pretty terrible day for rain.
Today was the first day of camp at LOMC. Emma started at LOMC, then Kiri joined her, and about three summers later I started going. It was my third year.
Of course, it had to rain on the day we got dropped off and had to deal with all our stuff. Plus, there was dirt and dust everywhere, and now it was mud. Great. Just great.
Suddenly, we took a sharp turn onto a side dirt road with a wooden sign that read LOMC in big gold letters. The sign was soaked. The ground was soaked. Everything was soaked. The second you stepped out into this weather you were sure to be soaked and freezing in 5 seconds flat. 
"We're here!" Kiri's dad said cheerfully while we pulled up the short dirt road. Emma, Kiri and I were definitely excited to be there, but the weather wasn't exactly ideal. 
The car pulled into a parking space and shut off. Now all we could hear was the bitter rain pelting the windows.
"Is anybody else cold?" I asked. Kiri and Emma both agreed, but Kiri's dad seemed optimistic. Great.
"Okay, lets check you in first and we'll come back to get your things," he said, already stepping out of the car in a attempt to get us to follow. We all groaned. Although at the same time we agreed silently that we might as well just go.
The second I stepped out of the car I was immediately pulled by the freezing wind. I was not only being practically blown away by it, but the rain was worse than it seemed from the safety of the car. The second you felt a raindrop, it almost numbed you. And the rain wasn't just falling, it was being whipped into your face by the wind like a tornado.
Emma jumped out of the car and she reacted just as I expected.
"I'm FREEZING!" She shivered. "Lets go to the pole barn! At least there won't be as much rain!"
The pole barn was a huge barn with open walls and a roof supported by wooden poles. Picnic table were placed along the inside, and that's where we had to go to check in. We all ran through the rain to the pole barn, where Kiri's dad began the long process of checking us in. 
"Helen! Emma!" Kiri called from the side of the barn. "Look over here!" 
"Where?" I said, shivering. 
Kiri laughed. "C'mon!" 
I walked over to where my cousin was standing. She was in the middle of a circle of brightly colored picnic tables.
"Look at this." Kiri said, smiling. When I looked around, I saw that each of them were uniquely painted with patterns and names. It was a myriad of bright colors and last-minute additions, with splatter paint and mixed-up names placed in every nook and cranny of the tables. 
"Do you recognize any of them?" I asked. I saw that some were from the year before, but a lot of them were from this year.
"Some of them," Kiri replied. "But there's a lot of new ones, too."
Emma walked over. "Hey you guys, look at the sky!"
Kiri and I turned to look out. "What about it?"
Emma laughed. "It stopped raining! And look at that rainbow!"
She was right. It had stopped raining, and now the entire world sparkled with the raindrops. There was a vivid rainbow that looked like a mix of paint across the sky. 
"It's so pretty!" Kiri's voice sounded like it was smiling.
I looked back at the sky. The rainbow was still there, and it remained there for the rest of the day. Even the sun was a shining penny in the sky. We had started the day with a gloomy, wet rain, and we had ended it with a beautiful sunset.

Monday, October 21, 2013

10.21.13- From Sad to Sunny

From Sad to Sunny

"Seriously? It's raining?" My cousin Kiri complained.
She was right. It was pouring. The raindrops leaked down the window and the entire car was freezing. If you looked down at the road, you could see that there were puddles scattered along the ground and the car splashed through them easily.
Kiri's dad tried to calm her down, but she wasn't having it. I agreed with her though, it was a pretty terrible day for rain.
Today was the first day of camp at LOMC. Emma started at LOMC, then Kiri joined her, and about three summers later I started going. It was my third year.
Of course, it had to rain on the day we got dropped off and had to deal with all our stuff. Plus, there was dirt and dust everywhere, and now it was mud. Great. Just great.
Suddenly, we took a sharp turn onto a side dirt road with a wooden sign that read LOMC in big gold letters. The sign was soaked. The ground was soaked. Everything was soaked. The second you stepped out into this weather you were sure to be soaked and freezing in 5 seconds flat. 
"We're here!" Kiri's dad said cheerfully while we pulled up the short dirt road. Emma, Kiri and I were definitely excited to be there, but the weather wasn't exactly ideal. 
The car pulled into a parking space and shut off. Now all we could hear was the bitter rain pelting the windows.
"Is anybody else cold?" I asked. Kiri and Emma both agreed, but Kiri's dad seemed optimistic. Great.
"Okay, lets check you in first and we'll come back to get your things," he said, already stepping out of the car in a attempt to get us to follow. We all groaned. Although at the same time we agreed silently that we might as well just go.
The second I stepped out of the car I was immediately pulled by the freezing wind. I was not only being practically blown away by it, but the rain was worse than it seemed from the safety of the car. The second you felt a raindrop, it almost numbed you. And the rain wasn't just falling, it was being whipped into your face by the wind like a tornado.
Emma jumped out of the car and she reacted just as I expected.
"I'm FREEZING!" She shivered. "Lets go to the pole barn! At least there won't be as much rain!"
The pole barn was a huge barn with open walls and a roof supported by wooden poles. Picnic table were placed along the inside, and that's where we had to go to check in. We all ran through the rain to the pole barn, where Kiri's dad began the long process of checking us in. 
"Helen! Emma!" Kiri called from the side of the barn. "Look over here!" 
"Where?" I said, shivering. 
Kiri laughed. "C'mon!" 
I walked over to where my cousin was standing. She was in the middle of a circle of brightly colored picnic tables.
"Look at this." Kiri said, smiling. When I looked around, I saw that each of them were uniquely painted with patterns and names. It was a myriad of bright colors and last-minute additions, with splatter paint and mixed-up names placed in every nook and cranny of the tables. 
"Do you recognize any of them?" I asked. I saw that some were from the year before, but a lot of them were from this year.
"Some of them," Kiri replied. "But there's a lot of new ones, too."
Emma walked over. "Hey you guys, look at the sky!"
Kiri and I turned to look out. "What about it?"
Emma laughed. "It stopped raining! And look at that rainbow!"
She was right. It had stopped raining, and now the entire world sparkled with the raindrops. There was a vivid rainbow that looked like a mix of paint across the sky. 
"It's so pretty!" Kiri's voice sounded like it was smiling.
I looked back at the sky. The rainbow was still there, and it remained there for the rest of the day. Even the sun was a shining penny in the sky. We had started the day with a gloomy, wet rain, and we had ended it with a beautiful sunset.

Friday, October 18, 2013

10.18.13- From Sad to Sunny

From Sad to Sunny

"Seriously? It's raining?" My cousin Kiri complained.
She was right. It was pouring. The raindrops leaked down the window and the entire car was freezing. If you looked down at the road, you could see that there were puddles scattered along the ground and the car splashed through them easily.
Kiri's dad tried to calm her down, but she wasn't having it. I agreed with her though, it was a pretty terrible day for rain.
Today was the first day of camp at LOMC. Emma started at LOMC, then Kiri joined her, and about three summers later I started going. It was my third year.
Of course, it had to rain on the day we got dropped off and had to deal with all our stuff. Plus, there was dirt and dust everywhere, and now it was mud. Great. Just great.
Suddenly, we took a sharp turn onto a side dirt road with a wooden sign that read LOMC in big gold letters. The sign was soaked. The ground was soaked. Everything was soaked. The second you stepped out into this weather you were sure to be soaked and freezing in 5 seconds flat. 
"We're here!" Kiri's dad said cheerfully while we pulled up the short dirt road. Emma, Kiri and I were definitely excited to be there, but the weather wasn't exactly ideal. 
The car pulled into a parking space and shut off. Now all we could hear was the bitter rain pelting the windows.
"Is anybody else cold?" I asked. Kiri and Emma both agreed, but Kiri's dad seemed optimistic. Great.
"Okay, lets check you in first and we'll come back to get your things," he said, already stepping out of the car in a attempt to get us to follow. We all groaned. Although at the same time we agreed silently that we might as well just go.
The second I stepped out of the car I was immediately pulled by the freezing wind. I was not only being practically blown away by it, but the rain was worse than it seemed from the safety of the car. The second you felt a raindrop, it almost numbed you. And the rain wasn't just falling, it was being whipped into your face by the wind like a tornado.
Emma jumped out of the car and she reacted just as I expected.
"I'm FREEZING!" She shivered. "Lets go to the pole barn! At least there won't be as much rain!"
The pole barn was a huge barn with open walls and a roof supported by wooden poles. Picnic table were placed along the inside, and that's where we had to go to check in. We all ran through the rain to the pole barn, where Kiri's dad began the long process of checking us in. 
"Helen! Emma!" Kiri called from the side of the barn. "Look over here!" 
"Where?" I said, shivering. 
Kiri laughed. "C'mon!" 
I walked over to where my cousin was standing. She was in the middle of a circle of brightly colored picnic tables.
"Look at this." Kiri said, smiling. When I looked around, I saw that each of them were uniquely painted with patterns and names. It was a myriad of bright colors and last minute additions, with splatter paint and mixed-up names placed in every nook and cranny of the tables. 
"Do you recognize any of them?" I asked. I saw that some were from the year before, but a lot of them were from this year.
"Some of them," Kiri replied. "But there's a lot of new ones, too."
Emma walked over. "Hey you guys, look at the sky!"
Kiri and I turned to look out. "What about it?"
Emma laughed. "It stopped raining! And look at that rainbow!"
She was right. It had stopped raining, and now the entire world sparkled with the raindrops. There was a vivid rainbow that looked like a mix of paint across the sky. 
"It's so pretty!" Kiri's voice sounded like it was smiling.
I looked back at the sky. The rainbow was still there, and it remained there for the rest of the day. Even the sun was a shining penny in the sky. We had started the day with a gloomy, wet rain, and we had ended it with a beautiful sunset.

Thursday, October 17, 2013

10.17.13

What is the most important message you heard from Joey Nowak during our video call?

I think that the fact that he said you have to start small and just do your best, then you'll get farther. Rather than complain, he did his work and he made it. So that's a lesson. If you start young and share your work, then if you work and not complain, then you'll make it. Even if you don't, at least you can say you tried.

Monday, October 14, 2013

10.14.13- From sad to sunny

All of my work from today was deleted. I'll post it along with tomorrow's.

Friday, October 11, 2013

10.11.13- From Sad to Sunny

From Sad to Sunny

"Seriously? It's raining?" My cousin Kiri complained.
She was right. It was pouring. The raindrops leaked down the window and the entire car was freezing. If you looked down at the road, you could see that there were puddles scattered along the ground and the car splashed through them easily.
Kiri's dad tried to calm her down, but she wasn't having it. I agreed with her though, it was a pretty terrible day for rain.
Today was the first day of camp at LOMC. Emma started at LOMC, then Kiri joined her, and about three summers later I started going. It was my third year.
Of course, it had to rain on the day we got dropped off and had to deal with all our stuff. Plus, there was dirt and dust everywhere, and now it was mud. Great. Just great.
Suddenly, we took a sharp turn onto a side dirt road with a wooden sign that read LOMC in big gold letters. The sign was soaked. The ground was soaked. Everything was soaked. The second you stepped out into this weather you were sure to be soaked and freezing in 5 seconds flat. 
"We're here!" Kiri's dad said cheerfully while we pulled up the short dirt road. Emma, Kiri and I were definitely excited to be there, but the weather wasn't exactly ideal. 
The car pulled into a parking space and shut off. Now all we could hear was the bitter rain pelting the windows.
"Is anybody else cold?" I asked. Kiri and Emma both agreed, but Kiri's dad seemed optimistic. Great.
"Okay, lets check you in first and we'll come back to get your things," he said, already stepping out of the car in a attempt to get us to follow. We all groaned. Although at the same time we agreed silently that we might as well just go.
The second I stepped out of the car I was immediately pulled by the freezing wind. I was not only being practically blown away by it, but the rain was worse than it seemed from the safety of the car. The second you felt a raindrop, it almost numbed you. And the rain wasn't just falling, it was being whipped into your face by the wind like a tornado.
Emma jumped out of the car and she reacted just as I expected.
"I'm FREEZING!" She shivered. "Lets go to the pole barn! At least there won't be as much rain!"
The pole barn was a huge barn with open walls and a roof supported by wooden poles. Picnic table were placed along the inside, and that's where we had to go to check in. We all ran through the rain to the pole barn, where Kiri's dad began the long process of checking us in. 
"Helen! Emma!" Kiri called from the side of the barn. "Look over here!" 
"Where?" I said, shivering. 
Kiri laughed. "C'mon!" 
I walked over to where my cousin was standing. She was in the middle of a circle of brightly colored picnic tables.
"Look at this." Kiri said, smiling. When I looked around, I saw that each of them were uniquely painted with patterns and names.
Emma walked over. "Look at the sky!"
Kiri and I turned to look out. "What about it?"
Emma laughed. "It stopped raining! And look at that rainbow!"
She was right. It had stopped raining, and now the entire world sparkled with the raindrops. There was a vivid rainbow that looked like a mix of paint across the sky. 
"It's so pretty!" Kiri's voice sounded like it was smiling.
I looked back at the sky. The rainbow was still there, and it remained there for the rest of the day. Even the sun was a shining penny in the sky. We had started the day with a gloomy, wet rain, and we had ended it with a beautiful sunset.

Thursday, October 10, 2013

10.10.13- From Sad to Sunny

"Seriously? It's raining?" My cousin Kiri complained.
She was right. It was pouring. The raindrops leaked down the window and the entire car was freezing. If you looked down at the road, you could see that there were puddles scattered along the ground and the car splashed through them easily.
Kiri's dad tried to calm her down, but she wasn't having it. I agreed with her though, it was a pretty terrible day for rain.
Today was the first day of camp at LOMC. Emma started at LOMC, then Kiri joined her, and about three summers later I started going. It was my third year.
Of course, it had to rain on the day we got dropped off and had to deal with all our stuff. Plus, there was dirt and dust everywhere, and now it was mud. Great. Just great.
Suddenly, we took a sharp turn onto a side dirt road with a wooden sign that read LOMC in big gold letters. The sign was soaked. The ground was soaked. Everything was soaked. The second you stepped out into this weather you were sure to be soaked and freezing in 5 seconds flat. 
"We're here!" Kiri's dad said cheerfully while we pulled up the short dirt road. Emma, Kiri and I were definitely excited to be there, but the weather wasn't exactly ideal. 
The car pulled into a parking space and shut off. Now all we could hear was the bitter rain pelting the windows.
"Is anybody else cold?" I asked. Kiri and Emma both agreed, but Kiri's dad seemed optimistic. Great.
"Okay, lets check you in first and we'll come back to get your things," he said, already stepping out of the car in a attempt to get us to follow. We all groaned. Although at the same time we agreed silently that we might as well just go.
The second I stepped out of the car I was immediately pulled by the freezing wind. I was not only being practically blown away by the freezing wind, but the rain was worse than it seemed from the safety of the car. The second you felt a raindrop, it almost numbed you. And the rain wasn't just falling, it was being whipped into your face by the wind like a tornado.
Emma jumped out of the car and she reacted just as I expected.
"I'm FREEZING!" She shivered. "Lets go to the pole barn! At least there won't be as much rain!"
The pole barn was a huge barn with open walls and a roof supported by wooden poles. Picnic table were placed along the inside, and that's where we had to go to check in. We all ran through the rain to the pole barn, where Kiri's dad began the long process of checking us in. 
"Helen! Emma!" Kiri called from the side of the barn. "Look over here!" 
"Where?" I said, shivering. 
Kiri laughed. "C'mon!" 
I walked over to where my cousin was standing. 
"Look at these tables." Kiri said, smiling. Picnic tables were placed all over the barn. Each of them were uniquely painted with patterns and names.
Emma walked over. "Whoa, those are pretty. But have you looked outside?"
Kiri and I turned to look out. "What about it?"
Emma laughed. "It stopped raining! And look at that rainbow!"
She was right. It had stopped raining, and now the entire world sparkled with the raindrops. There was a vivid rainbow that looked like a mix of paint across the sky. 
"It's so pretty!" Kiri's voice sounded like it was smiling.
I looked back at the sky. The rainbow was still there, and it remained there for the rest of the day. Even the sun was a shining penny in the sky. We had started the day with a gloomy, wet rain, and we had ended it with a beautiful sunset.

Wednesday, October 9, 2013

10.9.13- Small Moment #1 Editing


"Seriously? It's raining?" My cousin Kiri complained.
She was right. It was pouring. The raindrops leaked down the window and the entire car was freezing. If you looked down at the road, you could see that there were puddles scattered along the ground and the car splashed through them easily.
Kiri's dad tried to calm her down, but she wasn't having it. I agreed with her though, it was a pretty terrible day for rain.
Today was the first day of camp at LOMC. Emma started at LOMC, then Kiri joined her, and about three summers later I started going. It was my third year.
Of course, it had to rain on the day we got dropped off and had to deal with all our stuff. Plus, there was dirt and dust everywhere, and now it was mud.
Suddenly, we took a sharp turn onto a side dirt road with a wooden sign that read LOMC in big gold letters. The sign was soaked. The ground was soaked. Everything was soaked. The second you stepped out into this weather you were sure to be soaked and freezing in 5 seconds flat. 
"We're here!" Kiri's dad said cheerfully while we pulled up the short dirt road. Emma, Kiri and I were definitely excited to be there, but the weather wasn't exactly ideal. 
The car pulled into a parking space and shut off. Now all we could hear was the bitter rain pelting the windows.
"Is anybody else cold?" I asked. Kiri and Emma both agreed, but Kiri's dad seemed optimistic. Great.
"Okay, lets check you in first and we'll come back to get your things," he said, already stepping out of the car in a attempt to get us to follow. We all groaned. Although at the same time we agreed silently that we might as well just go.
The second I stepped out of the car I was immediately pulled by the freezing wind. I was not only being practically blown away by the freezing wind, but the rain was worse than it seemed from the safety of the car. The second you felt a raindrop, it almost numbed you. And the rain wasn't just falling, it was being whipped into your face by the wind like a tornado.
Emma jumped out of the car and she reacted just as I expected.
"I'm FREEZING!" She shivered. "Lets go to the pole barn! At least there won't be as much rain!"
The pole barn was a huge barn with open walls and a roof supported by wooden poles. Picnic table were placed along the inside, and that's where we had to go to check in. We all ran through the rain to the pole barn, where Kiri's dad began the long process of checking us in. 
"Helen! Emma!" Kiri called from the side of the barn. "Look over here!" 
"Where?" I said, shivering. 
Kiri laughed. "C'mon!" 
I walked over to where my cousin was standing. 
"Look at these tables." Kiri said, smiling. Picnic tables were placed all over the barn. Each of them were uniquely painted with patterns and names.
Emma walked over. "Whoa, those are pretty. But have you looked outside?"
Kiri and I turned to look out. "What about it?"
Emma laughed. "It stopped raining! And look at that rainbow!"
She was right. It had stopped raining, and now the entire world sparkled with the raindrops. There was a vivid rainbow across the sky with shining colors and a beautiful sky. 
"Well," I said. "I guess it's not so bad anymore."

Monday, October 7, 2013

10.7.13- *Title in progress*

I checked the clock.
"It's eleven o' clock, ya know."
"Yup." My brother said sarcastically.
"I'm bored." I said, staring at a blank TV.
"Then do something." My brother said. He wasn't making this conversation easy. Finally my dad joined in. 
"Do you want to explore the hotel?" 
"Of course I do!" I jumped up and grabbed my shoes. "Let's go lets go lets go!"
My brother groaned. But I can tell that he was a little bit curious too. A little bit. So he came along.
When we stepped out into the hallway, a chill from the hotel hallway passed over us. Have you ever noticed that when you go into a hotel, there is a feeling that everyone gets. A kind of official, standoffish feeling. Plus, since we were the in the room at the end of the hallway, you look down the hallway and everything is symmetrical, with plush carpets and lamps above every door that cast a golden glow over everything. 
Our hotel was was perfect to explore at 11 o clock at night. It was big and had plenty of places to see. In fact, it was only our second night, and we had gotten in at 10 o clock the night before. In a nutshell, basically we hadn't seen our entire hotel yet. We've only seen half of the hotel anyway! 
"I wanna see the pool!" I requested in a whisper once we had stepped into the elevator.
My brother shrugged, and since he was staring at his phone, I turned to my dad for a answer. 
"Sure." He said.
"But isn't it closed by now?" I asked.
"I wanna see the pool!" I requested in a whisper once we had stepped into the elevator.
My brother shrugged, and since he was staring at his phone, I turned to my dad for a answer. 
"Sure." He said.
"But isn't it closed by now?" I asked.
"Probably. But why'd you ask if you already knew the answer?" 
"I wanted too. I wasn't sure though."
When we finally reached the pool floor, we realized that we needed our hotel key to get in. My brother walked back to the elevator, clearly not at all worried that we haven't seen the pool yet besides some pictures. When he stepped back into the carpeted elevator, I pulled at the door to the pool and found it was unlocked. 
Instant humidity. The wave of humidity and the smell of chlorine hit me like a ton of bricks.
"Oh my god." I said in shock. "It's so strong! Can you guys feel that?!"
I turned around and saw that my dad had clearly felt it too, and my brother was oblivious to the world as per usual. 
The pool was so pretty. The entire room was completely symmetrical and there were skylights along the entire ceiling. Along the sides of the pool there were pillars with rings of gold circling them. Even the towels had good gold stripes on them. 

Friday, October 4, 2013

10.4.13- *Title in progress*

I checked the clock.
"It's eleven o' clock, ya know."
"Yup." My brother said sarcastically.
"I'm bored." I said, staring at a blank TV.
"Then do something." My brother said. He wasn't making this conversation easy. Finally my dad joined in. 
"Do you want to explore the hotel?" 
"Of course I do!" I jumped up and grabbed my shoes. "Let's go lets go lets go!"
My brother groaned. But I can tell that he was a little bit curious too. A little bit. So he came along.
When we stepped out into the hallway, a chill from the hotel hallway passed over us. Have you ever noticed that when you go into a hotel, there is a feeling that everyone gets. A kind of official, standoffish feeling. Plus, since we were the in the room at the end of the hallway, you look down the hallway and everything is symmetrical, with plush carpets and lamps above every door that cast a golden glow over everything. 
Our hotel was was perfect to explore at 11 o clock at night. It was big and had plenty of places to see. In fact, it was only our second night, and we had gotten in at 10 o clock the night before. In a nutshell, basically we hadn't seen our entire hotel yet. We've only seen half of the hotel anyway!

Thursday, October 3, 2013

10.3.13- My Small Moment #3

checked the clock.
"It's eleven o' clock, ya know."
"Yup." My brother said sarcastically.
"I'm bored." I said, staring at a blank TV.
"Then do something." My brother said. He wasn't making this conversation easy. Finally my dad joined in. 
"Do you want to explore the hotel?" 
"Of course I do!" I jumped up and grabbed my shoes. "Let's go lets go lets go!"
My brother groaned. But I can tell that he was a little bit curious too. A little bit. So he came along.
When we stepped out into the hallway, 
*I WORKED ON MY THOUGHT ORGANIZATION CHART WITH SMALL MOMENT ONE*

Wednesday, October 2, 2013

10.2.13- My Small Moment #3

I checked the clock.
"It's eleven o' clock, ya know."
"Yup." My brother said sarcastically.
"I'm bored." I said, staring at a blank TV.
"Then do something." My brother said. He wasn't making this conversation easy. Finally my dad joined in. 
"Do you want to explore the hotel?" 
"Of course I do!" I jumped up and grabbed my shoes. "Let's go lets go lets go!"
My brother groaned. 

Tuesday, October 1, 2013

10.1.13- My Small Moment #3

I checked the clock.
"It's eleven o' clock, ya know."
"Yup." My brother said sarcastically.
"Let's explore already! We haven't been to the pool yet, and we haven't seen the roof..." 

10.1.13- My Small Moment #2

Traditionally, in Grand Haven, every summer night there is a light show. Basically, you watch a fountain shoot out water, colored lights, and music while sitting on some freezing bleachers. But it's fun. Sometimes. This particular time, though, it was dripping rain and freezing cold. It didn't really help with the fact that the bleachers were in front of a man made river. On one side were the bleachers, and on the other was the fountain. 
It seemed like it took forever for the show to finally start. My parents were admiring the river and taking their time, but I was ready to move on. I mean, to be honest, if I wasn't there for the trip, I don't think anything would get done besides staring at a museum wall for 2 days. So they should thank me.
While they talked on and on about whatever new history they had picked up I circled around them again and again trying to get their attention. Nothing else had worked, so I had to resort to this. I got dizzy, but they finally noticed me.
"Stop that," my dad said, half listening to my mom still. 
I stopped. But only briefly. I did this routine about 5 times until they finally asked me what I wanted to do.
"We have an hour. What do you want to do?" My mom asked.
"I don't know. When does the light show start??" I said impatiently. "We've been waiting forever!!"
"We've been waiting for half an hour and it starts at nine. It's 7:45 now." My dad said.
*IM GOING TO START A NEW STORY AND I MIGHT COME BACK TO THIS ONE LATER. I MIGHT NOT.*